1. You included a lot of very interesting information. You did an exceptional job telling about her interests, her role in the White House, and presenting other interesting facts. 2. Volume of recording was adequate. 3. Clear, pleasant speaking voice.
Weaknesses
1. Your presentation of the material needed major work. You sounded as if you were chewing gum during the presentation. 2 You laughed during your presentation, even though there was no humor in your content. That was very unprofessional. 3. At the end, you said, “That’s it.” 3. You said the wrong word for “extramarital,”
Kelsey Varwig
ReplyDeleteStrengths
1. You included a lot of very interesting information. You did an exceptional job telling about her interests, her role in the White House, and presenting other interesting facts.
2. Volume of recording was adequate.
3. Clear, pleasant speaking voice.
Weaknesses
1. Your presentation of the material needed major work. You sounded as if you were chewing gum during the presentation.
2 You laughed during your presentation, even though there was no humor in your content. That was very unprofessional.
3. At the end, you said, “That’s it.”
3. You said the wrong word for “extramarital,”
Overall grade 24/30